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Interpunction and term corrections

A comma was added in the lines 373, 379, 392 and 396;
In line 392 I've included "given" due to stylistic reasons;
I've changed "unprivileged" in line 394 based on contextual reasons;
I've changed the lexeme class in line 401;
I've changed the verb in line 403 due to the context;

Interpunctional additions

Omitted commas included in:
one line 321 and two times in line 336.

Stylistic improvements

line 290: I've added the definite article due to stylistic reasons.
line 297: I've deleted the second period at the end of the sentence.

Word change

I've changed the adjective in line 281 into a verb, due to the "natural flow" of the sentence.

Furthermore I have a question concerning your chosen noun in line 278, namely "weight factor". What do you want to state with it, respectively, what kind of context are we talking about?

Prepositional suggestion

I'd suggest to insert in line 244 and line 264 "to" in order to elucidate the relation between the subject and object.

Style adjustments

Applied changes:
line 213: I've changed a verb and preposition;
line 216: inserting a comparative particle due to stylistic reasons as well as changing two verbs;
line 220: I've inserted two missing commas, corrected a spelling and adjusted the sentence due to syntactic reasons.

Spelling corrections and translations

1. I've corrected the spelling in these lines:
line 175 (look up)
line 190 (multi-)

2. I've translated the missing phrases in the following lines:
line 173 ("Template" would be also appropriate, but I think this lexeme is already used in the WCF context)
line 200-206

3. I've corrected the spelling in line 190 (no capital letter)and changed the preposition due to the meaning.

Lexeme corrections

I've changed these things:
line 104: prepositional change
line 115: replacing a rather informal term into a more formal one. Moreover, I've added a plural-suffix and the latter sentence due to style.
line 126: inserting a comma and changing a preposition

Style correction

I'd suggest "concerning" in line 104, due to reasons of style. That means, it sounds more professional.

Sentence adjustments

Line 60/62/666/69/72: rewritten the compound (cronjob)and changed the verb due to the technical context.
Line 75: I'd suggest to use the technical equivalent.
Line 75 I've inserted the hyphen.
Line 79: I've corrected the preposition.

Syntax corrections

I've changed within these lines:
l.12 adjectival and verbal changes as well as replacing a capital letter and inserting a comma before the relative clause.
l.20, correction of the wrong preposition.
l.23 correction of the wrong preposition.

Grammar corrections

line 676: I've inserted the missing comma
line 712: I've added the plural-suffix to "Stunden"
line 720: I've added the plural-suffix to "Stunden"

Syntax adjustments

Line 643: I've changed the preposition to let it sound more regular.
Line 644: prepositional switch + plural-suffix added to the noun.
Line 658: I've added the missing verb
Line 664: I've added the missing verb

Sentence corrections

I've corrected within these lines:
line 547: syntactic switch of the negation particle
line: 584 the 3rd person pronoun "Sie" has to be written in capital letters
line 601: the 3rd person pronoun "Sie" was missing

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